
(Autumn)
Clouds move by,
As a breeze stirs the trees;
Woodpigeons call.
Ashley composed this beautiful, ephemeral hokku.
The photo of the clouds moving across the sky was also composed by Ashley.
Information on wood pigeons can be found here; to hear the call of a wood pigeon, go here.
“Like the clouds, the changing season drifts by, barely noticed.” I like that very much, Ashtree! They’re moving too fast for me! Thanks for the beautiful hokku, Fraxinus!
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Many thanks Edo! Because we write hokku within the season, we notice the seasons changing. Not everyone does and the clouds drifting by felt like a good metaphor. Glad you liked it! 🙋♂️
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A lovely restful hokku even though it speaks of change . . . and of wood pigeons which make me ‘jump out of my skin’ when they clatter about in the trees unexpectedly when I’m out in the woods! 😀
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Thank you, dear Lesley 💐💐🙋♂️
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